I'll be honest here.
I felt that the early part was a bit slow. But I did chuckle a bit at the last part. Now that's the only bad thing about the movie. Lets talk about the bright side.
The animation is superb. I really like how you animate your character to display those expressions. The characters got excellent body languages as well. The backgrounds are well drawn. Overall, the animation quality in this flash movie is pretty much above the usual stuffs you see on Newgrounds.
Maybe you might want to put some music to accompany your flash movie since it's rather driven by the character speeches and it's long so music would help (or it's because this is the first episode?) Anyway, that's just my suggestion.
Full score for the effort, you deserve it!